- Why is it the most popular social networking site?
- Show both sides to my argument
-'Farmville' - who made this? how do they earn money from it?
- Expand on the Strawberry Fair event
- Why do you think the media latches on to stories like the house party that went wrong?
- What did they do before technology when at home?
- More reference to arguments - for and against Facebook
- More statistical evidence
Feedback from students on my article so far;
- Explain the coin system further on 'Farmville'
- Expand on why people may not have joined my event that I made
- Publishing dates or articles I have researched are not necessary
There were also a few grammar mistakes that they wanted me to correct.
This feedback was very useful to me as I was quite stuck on how to make my article more fuller and more interesting for the reader. Now that I know a lot of things I need to add, I can get on with expanding my article and giving the students an article which will be easier for them to revise from.
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