Alie's Feedback on my Article - First Sub

Within our group we thought that it would be a good idea to print out our article how they are at the moment and to give them to a different member of our group to go through and say what we could change or improve. James was not present for this task so myself and Alie swapped articles, went through each others articles and once we were finished, we then both worked on James' article and then give it to him once he is back at college.

This was quite useful to us, as it gave us someone else view on what we could improve on and I think as myself and Alie are working on a similar topic, we had a lot we could share with each other to help us improve. As well as giving feedback, we also went through the article making sure that it follows the style house guide that the quality control team had produced. This meant that we had to look out for fonts, sizes, italics etc.

Below are two images of the feedback that I received from Alie.