Feedback From Mike on My Second Draft Article

To make sure that my article is the best it can be, I have to produce a new print out each time I make changes based on the feedback that I have been given and then get more feedback based on my updated version. I have decided to give most of my updated articles to someone in the quality control team to get my feedback.

This is feedback that Mike, from quality control, gave me;

- Texts and figures need to be added

- When did Facebook become global? expand on this

- Include a few more quotations

- What is the future of Facebook? explain this

- How has this developed with media in the online age? What change has been made to Facebook over time?